Help

[tinpra]

So I have finally done it. I've written Inception fic. I know, I know... Anywho, I need someone to read it and tell me if it works. Don't worry, I'm not looking for a full beta. You don't even have to run spellcheck. The fic is an AU and just needs to be read-through for believability. So...anybody game? *hopeful-face*