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[tinpra]

4/25/10, been working on this since Sunday school

When I am down in the oubliette
surrounded by death
oh Lord, whatever you may do
please don't release the thread
that keeps me looking up at you

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4/29/10, crossing the street on the home

I'm always kissing you in my dreams
but why in my dreams
do I always kiss you first?

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[dmr2158.livejournal.com]

The second poem is so poignant. I don't know why it spoke to me. I could just understand how the speaker felt. The realization that even in their dreams love was not to be. Very intriguing.

[tinpra.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It did sorta hit me over the head.